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egylife

ghoster1 wrote: »

Thanks for that really thoughtful and honest review. I admit I should have organized it better. But hey, feel free to check out the rest of my submissions:) I worked harder on those, that's for sure.

Most of my comments still apply

Your kill reel video definitely needs higher quality moments, an egy farm video works a lot better for "editing and effects"
In terms of audience perspective, it has to spark amazement and intensity from those multi kill moments - which your clips don't do
However I am a little strict in regards to showcasing good clips so don't put your expectation for your next video too high
Overall it's a bit boring

Your storyline video is a lot better made and has the benefit of voice acting to avoid the burden of having text to carry out dialogue
However voice acting is one of those hit and miss things and also it wasn't the worst, sometimes it made dialogue awkward
Some scenes are very cliche and by doing that your video seems like its focusing more on "how to make it sound cool" in exchange for missing a captivating and interesting artistic depiction
Other than that, the ending was very awkward
Although the storyline is better* produced I think the narrative was weak but had many things going for it like voice acting

It's too bad storyline was one of the harder entries to compete in, the same level of work might have won you teamwork

ghoster1

egylife wrote: »

Most of my comments still apply

Your kill reel video definitely needs higher quality moments, an egy farm video works a lot better for "editing and effects"
In terms of audience perspective, it has to spark amazement and intensity from those multi kill moments - which your clips don't do
However I am a little strict in regards to showcasing good clips so don't put your expectation for your next video too high
Overall it's a bit boring

Your storyline video is a lot better made and has the benefit of voice acting to avoid the burden of having text to carry out dialogue
However voice acting is one of those hit and miss things and also it wasn't the worst, sometimes it made dialogue awkward
Some scenes are very cliche and by doing that your video seems like its focusing more on "how to make it sound cool" in exchange for missing a captivating and interesting artistic depiction
Other than that, the ending was very awkward
Although the storyline is better* produced I think the narrative was weak but had many things going for it like voice acting

It's too bad storyline was one of the harder entries to compete in, the same level of work might have won you teamwork

You know, you'd make a really good judge for these. What's your ign? O.o clearly that's your alt.

egylife

ghoster1 wrote: »

You know, you'd make a really good judge for these. What's your ign? O.o clearly that's your alt.

kareemelpop1

And I didn't want to come across as belittling, but I hope you can respect my honesty as that's what it takes to improve content - to take criticism seriously and use it to your advantage

ghoster1

egylife wrote: »

kareemelpop1

And I didn't want to come across as belittling, but I hope you can respect my honesty as that's what it takes to improve content - to take criticism seriously and use it to your advantage

Haha, nah it's all good, that is the original point of this thread.
So what is your real ign.