"The dark knight" Story by 124Ahmed124 .. (Very very action story)
Hello guys ,
Just heard that stories make you smarter
so lets try this.
This story is fake. I wrote it.
~ the dark knight ~
It was the winter. When everyone stays in his home. A normal day became the worst day in Lara 's life.
At 7:45 , Lara was playing CF and chatting with friends online through facebook. In the other hand her mom was cooking and she needed more tomatoes. After checking the fridge she found out that they don't have any tomato.
So she asked Lara to go and buy 1kilo of tomatoes.
Mom: Lara..
Lara: wait mom , I'm playing.
After 2 hours
Mom: Lara can you go and buy 1kilo of tomato
Lara: No mom. I'm still playing.
Mom: "Slapped Lara" and give her 14$ (order is price)
Lara: •crying• and went to get the order.
But it wasn't a normal day.
After 20 mins of walking ,
Lara found out that there are no one in the street(s) even markets were closed.
•Lara disappointed and set on the ground to take a rest•
Then she remember her Mom order and how much she gonna be sad if she didn't get the tomato so she did Standup again and walked to next area 's market which takes 1 hour of walking.
It was a so hard for her to walk at this time lonely in empty zone.
Finally she reached the market and bought the order. In her way to back there were 3 drunk men.
When she walked In front of them they hit her with a brick (as they thought they could kidnap her and ask her parents for million $ to leave her)
But fortunately there was a strong boy walking in the same street and saw this situation.
As he was a good boy he couldn't see this situation and leave them kidnap her.
In notime he ran after them.
Someone of them tried to stop him but this strong boy have a target and he won't leave before he finish it.
##they fighted, but the boy won##
then 1 of the criminals got a handgun out from his jacket and aim on this boy head. •boy laughed•
TheBoy did Naruto job and hit the criminal with Sasuke elbow in head. < the last criminal ran away as he realized he would never beat this boy>
TheBoy received the girl from this danger and took her to her house.
In the way to house she kept asking that boy what's his name. But he didn't answer as he don't want to see his name on TV.
Finally , he told her his nickname ( 124 ) and said: feel free to ask for help in anytime.
Lara said thanks and hugged him as a big thanks
.
To be continued...
Character: Lara (Very very beautiful girl)
The boy (aka. 124) is a strong teenager.
Lara 's mom
these characters are FAKE and don't relate to the real life.
Story targets:
Do what your parents say.
Don't walk in the street while its empty N the time s late.
Be thankfully
Help people
Hope you guys did enjoy reading my story.
Regards
Just heard that stories make you smarter
so lets try this.This story is fake. I wrote it.
~ the dark knight ~
It was the winter. When everyone stays in his home. A normal day became the worst day in Lara 's life.
At 7:45 , Lara was playing CF and chatting with friends online through facebook. In the other hand her mom was cooking and she needed more tomatoes. After checking the fridge she found out that they don't have any tomato.
So she asked Lara to go and buy 1kilo of tomatoes.
Mom: Lara..
Lara: wait mom , I'm playing.
After 2 hours
Mom: Lara can you go and buy 1kilo of tomato
Lara: No mom. I'm still playing.
Mom: "Slapped Lara" and give her 14$ (order is price)
Lara: •crying• and went to get the order.
But it wasn't a normal day.
After 20 mins of walking ,
Lara found out that there are no one in the street(s) even markets were closed.
•Lara disappointed and set on the ground to take a rest•
Then she remember her Mom order and how much she gonna be sad if she didn't get the tomato so she did Standup again and walked to next area 's market which takes 1 hour of walking.
It was a so hard for her to walk at this time lonely in empty zone.
Finally she reached the market and bought the order. In her way to back there were 3 drunk men.
When she walked In front of them they hit her with a brick (as they thought they could kidnap her and ask her parents for million $ to leave her)
But fortunately there was a strong boy walking in the same street and saw this situation.
As he was a good boy he couldn't see this situation and leave them kidnap her.
In notime he ran after them.
Someone of them tried to stop him but this strong boy have a target and he won't leave before he finish it.
##they fighted, but the boy won##
then 1 of the criminals got a handgun out from his jacket and aim on this boy head. •boy laughed•
TheBoy did Naruto job and hit the criminal with Sasuke elbow in head. < the last criminal ran away as he realized he would never beat this boy>
TheBoy received the girl from this danger and took her to her house.
In the way to house she kept asking that boy what's his name. But he didn't answer as he don't want to see his name on TV.
Finally , he told her his nickname ( 124 ) and said: feel free to ask for help in anytime.
Lara said thanks and hugged him as a big thanks
.To be continued...
Character: Lara (Very very beautiful girl)
The boy (aka. 124) is a strong teenager.
Lara 's mom
these characters are FAKE and don't relate to the real life.
Story targets:
Do what your parents say.
Don't walk in the street while its empty N the time s late.
Be thankfully
Help people
Hope you guys did enjoy reading my story
.Regards
Comments
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Yes manYou are so crazy ahmed!
SO CRAZY :cool:What a Momtastic...
Tell her daughter to go outside buy tomato at night...
The story not bad. I like creative, and thinking mind... Good Luck... on next story.
hmm , I had to show the bad side of the girl , As she deny her mom 's order in the first so she deserve anything happen to her.
Anyway , thanks so much I appreciate that. -
What the hell...14$ for a kilo of tomatoes? Ok, I'll let the fact that no one paying for tomatoes in dollars is gonna ask for a "kilo" (metric system op), but still, these are some freaking expensive tomatoes, no wonder the drunk guys thought they could get millions of dollars of ransom.
The mother is super lenient letting her daughter play and wait 2 full hours while she was cooking (!?) then proceeds to ask again and slap the crap out of her before asking to stop playing? She needs to rebalance her medication... also she had plenty of time to go get the tomatoes herself in these 2 hours...
Between the way that was written and the plot (lol, that plot) this seems like a preschool kid wrote it. I expected something better on this forum... for some reason. -
hmm , Im not from EU. So i dont know how much does tomatoes cost.What the hell...14$ for a kilo of tomatoes? Ok, I'll let the fact that no one paying for tomatoes in dollars is gonna ask for a "kilo" (metric system op), but still, these are some freaking expensive tomatoes, no wonder the drunk guys thought they could get millions of dollars of ransom.
The mother is super lenient letting her daughter play and wait 2 full hours while she was cooking (!?) then proceeds to ask again and slap the crap out of her before asking to stop playing? She needs to rebalance her medication... also she had plenty of time to go get the tomatoes herself in these 2 hours...
Between the way that was written and the plot (lol, that plot) this seems like a preschool kid wrote it. I expected something better on this forum... for some reason.
Lara may be a spoiled girl and her mam doesnt want to make her sad.
Idk why didnt her mum go and get it for herself , maybe because she was talking in CELL PHONE or looking after his little baby (I didnt mention to these things)
I wrote this story , took 1 hour , its my first time Im gonna make more and more. Do you like that boy in the story ^^ ? -
ELmalky7mar wrote: »Wow this was very emotional and I can relate to this on some level. Beautiful writing, this should become a short movie. It is worth of an Oscar award, maybe you should become a movie writer... This is something I would pay to watch.
Yes man I Spent 1.5 hours writing it ^_^
TY -
Not bad story but entering naruto, sakaki and CrossFire?! How?!
Dollar and Kilo?!
In U.S.A nothing its name is Kilo.
If you wrote Oliver Twist story with different facts, it would be good
I hope you learned from the story
@ElMalaky7mar
I love you because you want to make 124ahmed123 anther person, you want him to be good person. I want to make that too but I have no experiance -
** 124Ahmed124 **Not bad story but entering naruto, sakaki and CrossFire?! How?!
Dollar and Kilo?!
In U.S.A nothing its name is Kilo.
If you wrote Oliver Twist story with different facts, it would be good
I hope you learned from the story
@ElMalaky7mar
I love you because you want to make 124ahmed123 anther person, you want him to be good person. I want to make that too but I have no experiance
Everycountry has name for weight.
Kilo is international name of weights. It well known at all countries.
I'm not stealing somebody idea.
I'm the author.
I added my fav. Game & CHARs to it , So what?
Okay , it's ok. -
ELmalky7mar wrote: »Wow this was very emotional and I can relate to this on some level. Beautiful writing, this should become a short movie. It is worth of an Oscar award, maybe you should become a movie writer... This is something I would pay to watch.
hhhhhhhhh -
What the hell...14$ for a kilo of tomatoes? Ok, I'll let the fact that no one paying for tomatoes in dollars is gonna ask for a "kilo" (metric system op), but still, these are some freaking expensive tomatoes, no wonder the drunk guys thought they could get millions of dollars of ransom.
The mother is super lenient letting her daughter play and wait 2 full hours while she was cooking (!?) then proceeds to ask again and slap the crap out of her before asking to stop playing? She needs to rebalance her medication... also she had plenty of time to go get the tomatoes herself in these 2 hours...
Between the way that was written and the plot (lol, that plot) this seems like a preschool kid wrote it. I expected something better on this forum... for some reason.
Welcome to Crossfire! -
I was about to make you the Story 's hero.
Anyway , you are welcome
Do you know good Korean stories?
Historically? Not many.
I watch a lot of korean drama, not sure if that counts haha.
If you're dedicated enough to write, maybe do a bit of extensive research on a decent mythological or fantasy story or even stories based in real life. Then use the general storyline (not exactly copy it) and transform the characters to depict other figures in your own story. Key thing is probably understanding the story first; then make your move to describe your interpretation of story genres with your own plot and remaining story parts with chapters.
Personally I really like reading lengthy stories that are at least decently good; ranging from novels to long excerpts and documents on Kindle/the internet. I also watch a ton of war, action, and drama film series, which is what I generally watch because I don't pay for complete cable TV with all the channels. -
Great[MOD]Fizzeq wrote: »Historically? Not many.
I watch a lot of korean drama, not sure if that counts haha.
If you're dedicated enough to write, maybe do a bit of extensive research on a decent mythological or fantasy story or even stories based in real life. Then use the general storyline (not exactly copy it) and transform the characters to depict other figures in your own story. Key thing is probably understanding the story first; then make your move to describe your interpretation of story genres with your own plot and remaining story parts with chapters.
Personally I really like reading lengthy stories that are at least decently good; ranging from novels to long excerpts and documents on Kindle/the internet. I also watch a ton of war, action, and drama film series, which is what I generally watch because I don't pay for complete cable TV with all the channels. Reading is adding authors mind/brain to yours 
. It makes you smarter , that's why I wanted to read & write some stories.
Me2 , i watched many drama but not much action as most of the latest action is like star wars.. And i hate that
.
I 'd like to read some short stories (page or 2) of foreign countrys. I become bored when i read alot
Can you suggest to me some good drama/suspense (like Sherlock Holmes ..etc..) / comedy / lifestyle , hmm anykind but in English. I can't read or understand Korean language. IDK :cool:
Ty -
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[MOD]Fizzeq wrote: »No I didn't answer to the gender question. lol
I answered that Hyoyeon is a girl's name, a known korean singer's stage name. Also yes the avatar also resembles a korean girl wearing the current style of clothing that people in korea would often wear.
LOL Even his forum location in KOREA
askdasdjad , Hyoyeon is so beautiful *-* But she is 25
If she was 15 ................. -
Ops I remember that i see his picture before on instagram of CF. (Contests)
And he was a boy.
Hmm , idk , it seems that I did read a wrong name :P Sorry Hy0Ye0n.
LOL
It could be me or it could be someone else, I'm a boy or I'm a girl, who knows?[MOD]Fizzeq wrote: »No I didn't answer to the gender question. lol
I answered that Hyoyeon is a girl's name, a known korean singer's stage name. Also yes the avatar also resembles a korean girl wearing the current style of clothing that people in korea would often wear.
^-^LOL Even his forum location in KOREA
askdasdjad , Hyoyeon is so beautiful *-* But she is 25
If she was 15 .................
Not sure where you saw my location that says 'Korea' but then again, I might be in Korea and chillin' in CFNA. Who knows? -
What do you mean?! What do you want to say?!LOL Even his forum location in KOREA
askdasdjad , Hyoyeon is so beautiful *-* But she is 25
If she was 15 .................
It could be me or it could be someone else, I'm a boy or I'm a girl, who knows?
Not sure where you saw my location that says 'Korea' but then again, I might be in Korea and chillin' in CFNA. Who knows?
Then, who are you?!
Let us know you
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