Thinking of doing a 2nd CFFA need help

iStrawberryy

some good songs, something like this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8PfXvXMddqM


btw this is my first cffa

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TUzqbkAFqOg&list=UUqwLCZPTYASmC_ehFiWwlPQ


thanks guys

iStrawberryy

Guys cmon:(

Swuunis

want some advice from me ?

Truecore

I think you should sync the kills and effects more to the music to make it look and feel better (In my opinion). In my view, it seemed more like a gameplay than some frags, some examples could really be cut down because some of them you are trying to show off but it doesn't work out too well. Also throughout some parts of the video, the sound is slightly delayed, I am not sure if you planned this or if you missed something out.

Below is just my opinion on it

0:26 - 0:55 - I think the intro is a little long in my opinion and you can always cut out the intro of the music (Depends on the music choice).

1:50 - 2:13 - I think you were trying to show off but it didn't really go according to plan, you could easily cut that out as we are watching just 20 seconds of you jumping up and down trying to shoot him in attempt to get a good kill.

2:17 - 2:34 - Same as above.

2:41 - 3:00 - This was probably the only part that stood out well with some good kills within the video. I don't mean it in a bad way but this was the only part that I found interesting.

3:02 - 3:13 - The sound from the sniper was quite delayed.

iStrawberryy

Truecore wrote: »

I think you should sync the kills and effects more to the music to make it look and feel better (In my opinion). In my view, it seemed more like a gameplay than some frags, some examples could really be cut down because some of them you are trying to show off but it doesn't work out too well. Also throughout some parts of the video, the sound is slightly delayed, I am not sure if you planned this or if you missed something out.

Below is just my opinion on it

0:26 - 0:55 - I think the intro is a little long in my opinion and you can always cut out the intro of the music (Depends on the music choice).

1:50 - 2:13 - I think you were trying to show off but it didn't really go according to plan, you could easily cut that out as we are watching just 20 seconds of you jumping up and down trying to shoot him in attempt to get a good kill.

2:17 - 2:34 - Same as above.

2:41 - 3:00 - This was probably the only part that stood out well with some good kills within the video. I don't mean it in a bad way but this was the only part that I found interesting.

3:02 - 3:13 - The sound from the sniper was quite delayed.

Thanks a lot i will have much more time to look over&work on then second because im finished school today&off for summer,so yeah much appreciated anyway:)

iStrawberryy

Bump i guess?:s

iStrawberryy

Anybody got good music then?

iStrawberryy

Guys cmon:ss

Runtikis

Sorry but Are you even trying to win?
IMO
-besides your first 5k there were no good frags
-editing sucked
-intro was half your video


go back in-game save every game, take all your frags and try again. speed up the pace of your video, make it fast like a roller coaster okay?
ill be waiting for the 2nd video, take your time you only get two tries.

FRAGS WITH MISSES DONT LOOK GOOD( unless it is a spray down)