Crossfire Wallpapers

I made this wallpaper recently and was hoping to get some ideas on how it looks.
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What I'm looking for is more a rating (1-10) and a reason why and how I can make them look better. I'm testing out whether or not to keep trying or to give up with it.
EDIT: Made it smaller
Larger one is here http://i46.tinypic.com/28iyewx.jpg

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