Hardway On Fire #2

Gonna give some good criticism.

Decent video, but there was too much filter on the screen to really even see what was happening. It'd be nice to see the video without 3/4 of it being blurry, and maybe a few less filters. Keep it clean, never could go wrong with it.

Practice makes perfect

Example: Blackwidow and port clips, couldn't even see anything except for the very center being unblurred.

Took a few screenies just to show so you don't have to reference back to the video.






See what I mean? Super blurry, makes it a little bad on the eyes. Take that away, maybe blur the edges and it'd be awesome to watch.

Music choice was great, loved just listening to it. The little sound effects of the shooting was good too, that added something nice to the video.

Also another little thing, what if you shortened the intro a little? 15 seconds wait seems a little long, get a little bored waiting for the video to start. I think something short and punchy could really work here.

Hope this helps






Edit: Sorry about the large pics, never seem to get the right size lol...