Right back at it again by YouMadBro?

Independency
Independency
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Hey guys! This is my latest CF montage! I had some rendering issues and you might find some weird stuff going on!
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It took me 3 hours to render it and if I try to render again it will probably get worse! I am going to get a PC quite soon so I will be recording live game anymore if I get my PC just in time.
Let me know what you guys think about it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zGt6Ly8d-UI
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  • Truecore
    Truecore
    I would admit you are slowly getting better but you tend to use the same effects as in your last video if I remember correctly. Some of the effects can really get in the way of the gameplay which makes it slightly harder to watch.

    Also did you watch the video because I am not sure if you wanted it to look like this but there are black bars on the top and bottom of the video which looks slightly odd.

    3:26 - 3:43 - Why is there a black screen for like 20 seconds because it looks fairly odd and not needed. I think you might be trying to fit the song in the video but you can make the music go quieter towards the end of the video instead of having 20 seconds worth of a black screen.

    Apart from all the criticism, nice set of kills and a nice video to watch :)
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  • Independency
    Independency
    Truecore wrote: »
    I would admit you are slowly getting better but you tend to use the same effects as in your last video if I remember correctly. Some of the effects can really get in the way of the gameplay which makes it slightly harder to watch.

    Also did you watch the video because I am not sure if you wanted it to look like this but there are black bars on the top and bottom of the video which looks slightly odd.

    3:26 - 3:43 - Why is there a black screen for like 20 seconds because it looks fairly odd and not needed. I think you might be trying to fit the song in the video but you can make the music go quieter towards the end of the video instead of having 20 seconds worth of a black screen.

    Apart from all the criticism, nice set of kills and a nice video to watch :)

    First of I want to thank you for your feedback! That really means a lot to me!

    Yes, I did use some overlays again because I thought they would fit into the vid but after finishing to render the video I realized that some of them were not necessary.

    Those bars are "Cinematic bars" to give the video a bit more of cinema looks. It has been used in some other montages and I use those bars to cover the replay keys! Once I get a better computer I will remove those cinematic bars and only use them once in a while!

    Regarding the music : Since there was 1 more minute for the music to end I just left 20 secs of it going on slowly decreasing its volume. I will make sure to avoid doing that again!

    Thank you!
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  • lceBerg
    lceBerg
    What software to edit
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  • king_killaaa
    king_killaaa
    Nice video man. Subscribed :)
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  • Independency
    Independency
    MrShow0ff wrote: »
    What software to edit
    Sony vegas pro 11 :)
    peekatu wrote: »
    Nice video man. Subscribed :)

    Thank you very much!!! :)
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  • ChokinOnKush
    ChokinOnKush
    Pretty sick, oh please edit my frag :(
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  • Hussein_505h
    Hussein_505h
    Nice editing , but tbh I don't think that's your level of making videos :D

    I mean this one wasn't interesting like others I'm not rly sure why *_*

    but I always have fun in watching your old videos again and again and again , but this one wasn't on the level :) ...

    btw can U R try to show us some multi kills next time ? ;)

    anyway keep doing more videos <3
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  • Caramilkx
    Caramilkx
    great video bro im starting to like your vids keep up the good work, btw if you want to make the replay buttons stuff disappear press delete while in replay. Hope it helped xP
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  • Independency
    Independency
    Hussein_505h wrote: »
    Nice editing , but tbh I don't think that's your level of making videos :D

    I mean this one wasn't interesting like others I'm not rly sure why *_*

    but I always have fun in watching your old videos again and again and again , but this one wasn't on the level :) ...

    btw can U R try to show us some multi kills next time ? ;)

    anyway keep doing more videos <3

    Thank you very much for your feedback! I felt the same way with this one! Probably because this was going to be my 2nd CFFF entry but because of exams I kinda had to do some simple edits! Anyways thank you for your honest feedback that really means a lot to me! :)
    Caramilkx wrote: »
    great video bro im starting to like your vids keep up the good work, btw if you want to make the replay buttons stuff disappear press delete while in replay. Hope it helped xP

    Hey there! Thank you very much for letting me know what you think about my videos! Yes I am aware that pressing DEL the replay buttons dissapear but I tried to make a video with the map and some HUD of the game! Once I get a new computer I will record in-game so I won't be using replays anymore! Once again thank you very much for your support and feedback ! :)
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  • madanki
    madanki
    Independency wrote: »
    Hey there! Thank you very much for letting me know what you think about my videos! Yes I am aware that pressing DEL the replay buttons dissapear but I tried to make a video with the map and some HUD of the game! Once I get a new computer I will record in-game so I won't be using replays anymore! Once again thank you very much for your support and feedback ! :)

    Record two clips: 1st clip with the overlay and the 2nd clip with no overlay. In Vegas move the 2nd clip above the 1st clip, align where necessary so they are 100% in sync (zoom in, use Left/ Right arrow keys to move frame-by-frame and drag down the transparency on the 2nd clip so you can see them aligning with one another). Once you've done that it's a simple case of making a circle Mask in Pan/Crop over the Mini Map in the 2nd clip.

    This applies to anything else of the HUD that you want to keep in, but you'll probably have to add a Mask manually with the 'Anchor Tool' (or just hold Ctrl when clicking with the 'Normal Edit Tool' to add points).
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  • dragonshot2
    dragonshot2
    Im always happy to see new montages from the community, I hope soon I will be in this section with my ones ;P good work and keep on
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  • Independency
    Independency
    dragonshot2 wrote: »
    Im always happy to see new montages from the community, I hope soon I will be in this section with my ones ;P good work and keep on

    I will be waiting to see your montages! Good luck and thank you for your feedback! :)
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  • h0nesttt
    h0nesttt
    The editing and sync was ok, but it could have been a lot better.

    I thought the frags were terrible, it was just a bunch of jumping 1k's and i noticed some of them weren't even headshots. In a pub montage the frags need to be 4-8ks and good shots.

    Replay < In game recording

    I didn't enjoy it :(
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  • its_Isaac
    its_Isaac
    Try to make your videos shorter (2 minutes max) because to be honest, people's attention span is short nowadays. Plus you can make more videos!

    Try to get Magic Bullet Looks for some new colors. Don't overuse the particle overlay either. Also, cut the ending of some of your replays, meaning do not show yourself running after the kill because it does not seem that smooth in replay edits.

    All just constructive criticism but still enjoyed :) Liked
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  • dlvc_dusk
    dlvc_dusk
    Sorry, i didnt like it.
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  • Independency
    Independency
    h0nesttt wrote: »
    The editing and sync was ok, but it could have been a lot better.

    I thought the frags were terrible, it was just a bunch of jumping 1k's and i noticed some of them weren't even headshots. In a pub montage the frags need to be 4-8ks and good shots.

    Replay < In game recording

    I didn't enjoy it :(

    Thank you for your feedback! I am still getting used to all of this editting stuff :p I still have a lot of work ahead ! But while doing this 1k / jumpshots I will somehow get a lil better and find out some new editting features and what not! Anyways thank you very much for your honest opinion! :)
    its_Isaac wrote: »
    Try to make your videos shorter (2 minutes max) because to be honest, people's attention span is short nowadays. Plus you can make more videos!

    Try to get Magic Bullet Looks for some new colors. Don't overuse the particle overlay either. Also, cut the ending of some of your replays, meaning do not show yourself running after the kill because it does not seem that smooth in replay edits.

    All just constructive criticism but still enjoyed :) Liked

    First of I want to thank you for the help that you have provided me! For all the constructive criticism and video tutorials! I wouldn't be doing this without your help!
    The last 2 videos of my channels were supposed to be the CFFF entry but because of exams I only managed to finish one. This montage was supposed to be my 2nd but I didn't had enough time to finish it!
    I will try to get Magic Bullet for free to get some new colors in my montages and yes I shouldn't overuse some overlays!

    Thank you very much for your support and feedback! :)
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  • AlwaysSnipin
    AlwaysSnipin
    It's cool but there are some flaws that kinda ruin the montage like the gun sounds I know that you have to use your own since it won't sync into he gameplay as using slow motion but you picked the weirdest kinds of sounds to use for guns like the AK47 sound from CSS which fits with the flow of the gun in CF but sounds horrible.

    The flare thing ( Can't remember the effect name the thing which was on the screen like the yellow dots ) was kinda ruining the gameplay since it was everywhere and was even there when it wasn't needed.

    If you are going to do green screen you need to pull up the camera in the replay so it looks like it's where the head is putting it at where he legs should be isn't the best thing to do but it's a easy mistake

    This may look like I am trying to hate on the video but I am only trying to point out the flaws which are shown alot but still the clips were good maybe try to get in some feeds next time :)
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