Crossfire - TheFabiocool - Mission Failed?

Hi guys! This is my first ever edit of CF or anything else, using Sony Vegas Pro 10.0!

I just wanted you guys to give me some feedback about my video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9dDCXFC7UTo

I think it might be too dark?

Anyways... That's about it, don't forget to post what u think.

Oh and btw, Like, Sub, Fav, blah blah blah. Cya