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  • Two stars had "prime time" with the Dild0(kukri), they enjoyed it.
  • wow..this must be mad boring..lmao.

    Well, good luck to all contestants.
  • chibi the annoying chick strikes again




    cool story
  • It's 1967, and 2 sisters, Jessica and Victoria, are very peaceful together. But when Jessica steals a BF from Victoria, their relationship turns evil.

    They now are 2 trained agents that have traveled all over the world. They've fought many times, but nobody has won, yet.

    While in a jungle-like area, they find each-other. Jessica takes the first stab, but Victoria does a 360 mid air flip and kicks Jessica in the legs. Victoria then stabs her, and shoots her foot. Jessica drops to the ground, blood pouring out, almost as if it's a Halloween, red mist shooter.

    Victoria then takes out her Mutation Grenade, that's guaranteed to kill anybody, or anything. Jessica, while on the ground and bleeding, begs her to stop. Victoria then proudly exclaims, "It's over".

    Right as she goes to pull the pin, an anonymous person comes from the back. He tackles Victoria, but Jessica then takes her Kukri knife and swings, as hard as she can. The mans arm, not attached anymore, falls to the ground and floats in the blood. He's bleeding out of his face, arm socket ( duh ), mouth, and ears. He then gently falls to the ground.

    With all the commotion, Jessica takes her Kukri and slashes Victoria's leg, just hard enough to cut it and make her bleed severely, and then Jessica whacks the grenade out of Victoria's hand. The grenade goes flying, and both try to rescue it. Both bleeding severely, try to out-run each-other. Jessica reaches it first, kicks Victoria in the leg, and pulls the pin.

    "Please, don't!" Right as Victoria thought she was dead, Jessica takes the grenade and throws it as hard as she can.. in the opposite direction. "This is stupid, and I'm sorry." "Can we forgive each-other?" Just then, a man spots them and see's the blood. He panics, and calls the ambulance. When they arrive, it's to late for Jessica. Jessica dies of excessive bleeding, but Victoria made it through.

    Victoria now is happily married with a son, she now calls Jessica. While Victoria is deeply upset, she tries to forget about it.

    It's now 2006, and she's forgot most of it. Now when she thinks about how beautiful and kind Jessica was, it brings a smile to her face. Her son, Jessica, has graduated from college and is also happily married to a guy named Michael.

    THE END!

    IGN: AlessBallaz

    best story, right?
  • GringoLixo wrote: »
    My story obviously won. It was moving!

    look my story!
  • look my story!

    OH MAH GAWD that was.... just wow

























































































































































































































































































































































































































































    *cries* amazing!
  • It's 1967, and 2 sisters, Jessica and Victoria, are very peaceful together. But when Jessica steals a BF from Victoria, their relationship turns evil.

    They now are 2 trained agents that have traveled all over the world. They've fought many times, but nobody has won, yet.

    While in a jungle-like area, they find each-other. Jessica takes the first stab, but Victoria does a 360 mid air flip and kicks Jessica in the legs. Victoria then stabs her, and shoots her foot. Jessica drops to the ground, blood pouring out, almost as if it's a Halloween, red mist shooter.

    Victoria then takes out her Mutation Grenade, that's guaranteed to kill anybody, or anything. Jessica, while on the ground and bleeding, begs her to stop. Victoria then proudly exclaims, "It's over".

    Right as she goes to pull the pin, an anonymous person comes from the back. He tackles Victoria, but Jessica then takes her Kukri knife and swings, as hard as she can. The mans arm, not attached anymore, falls to the ground and floats in the blood. He's bleeding out of his face, arm socket ( duh ), mouth, and ears. He then gently falls to the ground.

    With all the commotion, Jessica takes her Kukri and slashes Victoria's leg, just hard enough to cut it and make her bleed severely, and then Jessica whacks the grenade out of Victoria's hand. The grenade goes flying, and both try to rescue it. Both bleeding severely, try to out-run each-other. Jessica reaches it first, kicks Victoria in the leg, and pulls the pin.

    "Please, don't!" Right as Victoria thought she was dead, Jessica takes the grenade and throws it as hard as she can.. in the opposite direction. "This is stupid, and I'm sorry." "Can we forgive each-other?" Just then, a man spots them and see's the blood. He panics, and calls the ambulance. When they arrive, it's to late for Jessica. Jessica dies of excessive bleeding, but Victoria made it through.

    Victoria now is happily married with a son, she now calls Jessica. While Victoria is deeply upset, she tries to forget about it.

    It's now 2006, and she's forgot most of it. Now when she thinks about how beautiful and kind Jessica was, it brings a smile to her face. Her son, Jessica, has graduated from college and is also happily married to a guy named Michael.

    THE END!

    IGN: AlessBallaz

    best story, right?
    Teehee I said Jessica is a dood