My first montage !

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CiFEmSZD_r4
Here it is, my first edit, not super pro but... oh well (:
I hope you all like it, I did my best, and i think for a first, it's not that bad
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EDIT: IM A NEWBIE IN THIS! Don't hate me ='( Constructive opinions please !