Planning a lil Frag vid (Not for CFFA)

Hey.
I am planning a little Ftag video.
No mich editing at the colors, bout 4 minutes.
So im planning the following:
Intro: (~20-30 secs)
First Part: TDM Ship, Monaco Egypt with AK Gold And AR-70(~90 secs)
Second part: TDM Prison, Monaco(Sniper only) (~60-90 secs)
Third part: Pistol nade and other awesome kills (~60 secs)
Ending: Credits and Clan advertisement.
So all in all: 4-4.5 minutes.
Im using Fraps and Corel Video studio Pro X3. Not as good as Vegas but better than WMM.
So, its NOT FOR CFFA 2011 I wont win so so what.
Im not hood at editing colors, just a bit.
So what do you think?

Edit: i gonna use only 3K kills, expect midairs and so on.

Edit 2: What music would you use? This should be NOT a slow video, it should be fast, but im not a metal fan.