Story i wrote v2

smogity · January 2011

um yea i forgot to post the link in my last thread, it was late, i was tired. anyway:

trying to get more people to give their opinions:

http://www.booksie.com/other/short_story/immu/the-closet

hehe got it right this time!

Liqweedate · January 2011

Cool story bro.

smogity · January 2011

Liqweedate wrote: »

Cool story bro.

i see what you did thar

0xBoF · January 2011

Did she die or something?

Btw, this is very good writing. I can imagine all the details so vividly it's really quite amazing. Good job.

smogity · January 2011

KillGod wrote: »

Did she die or something?

Btw, this is very good writing. I can imagine all the details so vividly it's really quite amazing. Good job.

You serious? haha thanks!

p.s. i let you decide what happened xD

AddictedUGH · January 2011

KillGod wrote: »

Did she die or something?

Btw, this is very good writing. I can imagine all the details so vividly it's really quite amazing. Good job.

You actually read that whole thing? oh em gee

smogity · January 2011

Barneywuv wrote: »

You actually read that whole thing? oh em gee

its not that long Dx

CallMeSoul · January 2011

I'm inferring that she in fact did pass away as he would've known if he watched the news
very touching now teach me how to use that site

smogity · January 2011

CallMeSoul wrote: »

I'm inferring that she in fact did pass away as he would've known if he watched the news
very touching now teach me how to use that site

haha thanks, just register and you can directly write on their pad or you can import stuff from word. It should explain on the site

0xBoF · January 2011

mynameizTim wrote: »

You serious? haha thanks!

p.s. i let you decide what happened xD

Yeah it was pretty good.. I could just totally imagine it all happening.

I like reading occasionally in my free time but have no talent for actually writing it myself

smogity · January 2011

KillGod wrote: »

Yeah it was pretty good.. I could just totally imagine it all happening.

I like reading occasionally in my free time but have no talent for actually writing it myself

thanks man it means a lot!

smogity · January 2011

Just published the story on a site called bookmato.com, i can get payed for each person that reads it haha, but i made it free since i don't want money for it.

Story i wrote v2

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