3fragmixclip

good things you did

You tried an effect, you tried a 3rd person intro/transition.

bad things- No colors ( they're necessary cuz of the bad graphics of the game). The sparkle effect you used was random and didn't mean anything(use when syncing...usually). The intro and transitions you had was a good try, but you need to use velocity and speed it up a little (getting to the frags). And also. you have black lines on the side of the vid, to get rid of them it's easy,just go into pan crop and select widescreen.

overall- ehhh not so good.

i suggest learning from the best, (not me, or Neofitz ;P)
http://www.youtube.com/user/SunnyPicturesTV