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Datkizzle · December 2010

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXUnHhbw1Xg

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Rstrict · December 2010

1.go on pan crop , select widescreen.
2.use a better color ( i think you used one? )
3.my opinion, between kills you shoulda used velocity and fast forwarded instead of just cutting

jG0NZ · December 2010

Xa_DarKAcE wrote: »

1.go on pan crop , select widescreen.
2.use a better color ( i think you used one? )
3.my opinion, between kills you shoulda used velocity and fast forwarded instead of just cutting

+1

4. add contrast to your colors if they feel bland.
5. format the video resolution so it fits the whole youtube screen.
6. Intro was a little annoying, seemed way too long to get to the frag because there wasn't much going on other than you taking your time around bridge/up stairs

Rstrict · December 2010

in all, good for your first edit, at least u attempted syncing

Datkizzle · December 2010

@ darkace 1 i noticed i hadnt done it after i rendered
2 i used a color but am not really good with them
3 ill check that out next time around

@ eyced really i just used the intro to by time.

xiKayto · December 2010

Just make the gunshots a little louder, and what everyone else above me said.

RobyGenius · December 2010

wouldnt look bad if u put ur amma a bit down

Datkizzle · December 2010

amma ?

anyways i re did some stuff to it and now rendering. hopefully this one is a little better.

Datkizzle · December 2010

scratch that. i cant seen to figure out the widescreen.

Rstrict · December 2010

Here's a great example of good colors, try to stick with green or blueish colors, sometimes yellowish colors can work.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wqE-Tk2Mj90
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cGvuYMZirB4&feature=related

If i can remember Neofitz is pretty decent at that kinda stuff

Cyclops#7 · December 2010

decent try.
Could of makes a way better video. The frags were good.

Datkizzle · December 2010

Cyclops#7 wrote: »

decent try.
Could of makes a way better video. The frags were good.

any tips ?

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