Tifa **Love Rap/Song** MY FIRST!

Hey guys, this is Tifa just a little nervous rap I made I know I suck but their is always room for improvement so just tell me what I need to improve on and what you all think of it. I wrote this myself and rapped it using a bg music synced with audacity. I have never written or rapped before, and this is the 2nd month of just freestyling so figured I would give it a shot.


Here's the link to download or listen live.

http://limelinx.com/files/3c7aebb22d7fa4e2386354de5fe71f79