Amazing MM Story

I hope this gets stickied because this is just an amazing story to me. I know it's kinda long but it's worth reading.

"Sir! The Mutants have breached our western flank!" shouted the pale rookie. " Call a meeting. Only people the ranks of captain and up are invited. " replied the general. The men soon began to gather in the building sitting into the weary soft chairs. " As you know, the mutants have destroyed our western flank leaving us vulnerable to any attack. We need to regain control of that area. Any ideas? " said General Saidin. " Sir, let me take my company. I mean, we can take a couple of green over sized freaks in pants." piped commander giggletron. " No listen you punk. Do you know how bullets it takes just to destroy one of those things? 4000! 4000 f**king thousand! And what? Your men carry how many bullets? 120 total and a small handgun? " shouted the General. " May I remind you General, our scientists at Sector Z-8 have created mutation magazines, armor piercing bullets, and attached many modifications to our weapons. " said Captain Rex. " Well now that you say it, take squads 1,2..." Alert! Alert! Incoming transmission from Western base. The General clicks the button. " This is patrol team 221 requesting immediate backup! We have many man down! Location sector 9-7-1. Repeat, location... Ahhh! *static* End transmission. " Captain Rex, take squads 1-12 on the apache helicopters and humvees and prepare to scour that base. I want to know what happened down there.

TO BE CONTINUED. OR, I'M TOO LAZY TO TYPE THE REST. Tommorow.
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  • i want it, now! =[
    m,ake giggletron giggle these greeny smelly sweaty muscular guys =3
  • Pssh, you forgot that they called the Green Ranger in with his Dragonzord, and the mutants were obliterated by unsurpassed manly green spandex and lasers. /end story.


    Good start btw :)

    Reads more like a play than a novel imho.
  • "the sound of the minigun echoed through port's A site, 4 soldiers were holding down the ramp preventing the mutants from getting the last cargo ship that was departing frm the port.
    -Hold these Fu.ckers!!! - Yelled SportMunzta while depletting his minigun ammo on the raging mutants.
    -Just aim for the heads... - said T4KeTh4t tapping greeny heads with her xm8.
    -Hell if that was easy! - Replied SportMunzta.
    -I know that they're dumb, but dumbness doesn't makes his head size smaller...
    -But makes their cranium harder! - Shouted BlackShady firing his camo-ish AWM against some unlucky mutant.
    -We're running out of ammo! - Said LOLSmilyFace while reloading his RPK
    -Keep shooting we're almost killing all of'em! - Said SportMunzta hammering the trigger.
    -Woah! Two down with one AWM shot! - Said BlackShady after the lucky shot.
    After some seconds of shooting frenzy the soldiers defeated the slug mutants, but in the distance they saw a titan coming with some berserkens.
    -Holy f**k we can't hold them down with only half a minigun mag and 2 sniper rounds... - Said T4k3Th4t looking at the escape boat.
    -Jump in guys! i'm going after you! - Said SportMunzta holding down the mutants.
    They jumped in the boat, and waited for Sport, the sound of the minigun stopped, and Sport jumped over them shooting the mutants with his p228.
    -Go! Now! - Yelled, Sport doing his aim.
    The motor Roared and then the 4 soldiers were looking at the greeny mutants falling down the edge of the building.
    -Hey, there's some green goo on you Sport... - Said LOLSmilyFace.
    BlackShady shot SportMunzta and pushed him out of the boat.
    -You know what happens when the mutants touch you don't you?... - Said Black pulling his pistol down.
    -Yes...
    They stopped the boat, and then a green hand grabbed the anchor of the boat, making everyone fall down, T4k3Th4t pulled out her pistol and then shot the anchor rope, releasing them.
    -That was close..."


    My version =3
  • Hm, I think I might try to write a play about it :3

    Any volunteers for cast/roles? I say we have Rex as the evil mastermind behind the mutant genome.
  • Hm, I think I might try to write a play about it :3

    Any volunteers for cast/roles? I say we have Rex as the evil mastermind behind the mutant genome.

    green oozee in him!
    make rexy act as the smoker titan =D
  • " All right, open the door." said commander jet. " This entry team, we are beginning entrance." The commander pulled open the door and his eyes opened when he saw what happened. Bodies littered the hallways, even a hand was grabbing the handle. " Bloody hell... " he muttered. " Entry team, proceed. " The commander pulled up his M4a1 carbine and moved slowly. " I want radio silence. Hand signals from now. " said the commander. He began to move to the door but then he heard a loud shot ring out from behind the door and raised his hand for his team to stop. " This is entry team. We have reached first checkpoint. Requesting permission to proceed." there was a brief silence. " Granted" replied and familiar voice. The commander raised his hand for his team to open the door. RunAwayGirl and T4K3TH4T come here. " Yes sir?" they said. " I want you to open the door and flash bang it. T4K3TH4T began to open the door when suddenly it flung out and there in the place of the door stood a green mutant. " Open fire! " The mutant began to take in heavy fire and began to run away. " Hah! He ran away. " shouted a private. " They never run away.... " said commander jet. Check if T4K3TH4T is okay. As the medic walked up to T4K3TH4T he saw that it was far to late to help. " Just give me a gun." T4K3TH4T choked out. The medic put a QBZ in his hand and ran after the team. " We are beginning to clear out the second floor. Base, please confirm. " Silence. " Shi.t we must have no signal here. Wait. shhh. Listen. " They heard gunfire below and then a loud scream. "They got T4K3TH4T. " said sargeant RunAwayGirl shaking her head. " I kinda liked him. "
  • " All right, open the door." said commander jet. " This entry team, we are beginning entrance." The commander pulled open the door and his eyes opened when he saw what happened. Bodies littered the hallways, even a hand was grabbing the handle. " Bloody hell... " he muttered. " Entry team, proceed. " The commander pulled up his M4a1 carbine and moved slowly. " I want radio silence. Hand signals from now. " said the commander. He began to move to the door but then he heard a loud shot ring out from behind the door and raised his hand for his team to stop. " This is entry team. We have reached first checkpoint. Requesting permission to proceed." there was a brief silence. " Granted" replied and familiar voice. The commander raised his hand for his team to open the door. RunAwayGirl and T4K3TH4T come here. " Yes sir?" they said. " I want you to open the door and flash bang it. T4K3TH4T began to open the door when suddenly it flung out and there in the place of the door stood a green mutant. " Open fire! " The mutant began to take in heavy fire and began to run away. " Hah! He ran away. " shouted a private. " They never run away.... " said commander jet. Check if T4K3TH4T is okay. As the medic walked up to T4K3TH4T he saw that it was far to late to help. " Just give me a gun." T4K3TH4T choked out. The medic put a QBZ in his hand and ran after the team. " We are beginning to clear out the second floor. Base, please confirm. " Silence. " Shi.t we must have no signal here. Wait. shhh. Listen. " They heard gunfire below and then a loud scream. "They got T4K3TH4T. " said sargeant RunAwayGirl shaking her head. " I kinda liked him. "

    you know, i'm a girl ._.
    runaway is hom0? =O
  • T4K3TH4T wrote: »
    you know, i'm a girl ._.
    runaway is hom0? =O
    Maybe she liked you as friends? ._.
  • Maybe she liked you as friends? ._.

    heh... that "i liked him" sounded more for a deep relationship ._.
    Kee Bee Zee, my fav gun until now, love it's chonga chonga sound =3
  • T4K3TH4T wrote: »
    heh... that "i liked him" sounded more for a deep relationship ._.
    Kee Bee Zee, my fav gun until now, love it's chonga chonga sound =3
    >.>
    Near-death situations make people do weird things.... :O
  • >.>
    Near-death situations make people do weird things.... :O

    like saying that you love someone? .o.
  • T4K3TH4T wrote: »
    like saying that you love someone? .o.
    well.... if you thought u were gunna die, u might get in a relationship with someone/thing you otherwise might not o_o...
  • well.... if you thought u were gunna die, u might get in a relationship with someone/thing you otherwise might not o_o...

    ranger, i have cancer, i have like, 7 days to live, i love you...
    nah, jk, i like you, kinda...
  • T4K3TH4T wrote: »
    ranger, i have cancer, i have like, 7 days to live, i love you...
    nah, jk, i like you, kinda...
    o_O...

    But I'm green... aren't you scared I might be a mutant?
  • o_O...

    But I'm green... aren't you scared I might be a mutant?

    do you weight almost half a ton by having spikes/giant muscles/green oozee in you?
    if not i'm not
  • T4K3TH4T wrote: »
    do you weight almost half a ton by having spikes/giant muscles/green oozee in you?
    if not i'm not
    I only weigh 130lb ._.

    But I have my dagger (does that count as a spike?) and my dragonzord weighs 200 tons >.>
  • I only weigh 130lb ._.

    But I have my dagger (does that count as a spike?) and my dragonzord weighs 200 tons >.>

    heh...
    does those make part of you?
  • T4K3TH4T wrote: »
    heh...
    does those make part of you?
    Well I do always keep it by my side..... o wait i see what u did there XD

    My dagger is technically a flute that can be played to unleash my dragonzord...
  • Well I do always keep it by my side..... o wait i see what u did there XD

    My dagger is technically a flute that can be played to unleash my dragonzord...

    so they're not parts of your body, i hope, at least, them i'm not afraid of ya ;P
  • I'd hope not ;D

    OT: I've decided to write a short story on this as well, but I didn't want to overlap or discredit your awesome tale. So I shall provide a prelude. Here goes.

    Prelude
    Log 1.

    A brisk wind whistled across a barren, snow covered plateau. Albeit dark and empty, the mixture of the cold Alaskan air and memories of a long forgotten childhood allowed Bruce to move forward with a welcomed sense of return. Having been traveling though the harsh and unwelcoming mountains of Brooks Range for what has seemed like an eternity, his single path of footprints shone under the moonlight; a silver trail slithering and churning like a snake hopelessly trying to escape the colossal mouth of what the locals appropriately call the Dragon's Claw.

    Up ahead Bruce could see a small sign, and a smile slowly crept up on his face. It read 'Anaktuvuk 31km ahead, Population 291'.

    "That's 5 less than 4 years ago," He pondered, "I wonder who has passed on since then?".

    Indeed the small community that he had learned to call home in the desolate north was never as robust as the city life he became accustomed to, but the community of Nunamiut was closely knit. The thought of having lost some of those that had raised him sent an unnerving chill down his spine, the feeling quickly reassured by a cold breeze gently caressing his face.

    Stopping to look at the clear sky above him, he took the opportunity to check his watch; time was of the essence, and almost as limited as what little breath he had left from the long and arduous trek. Hoping the heavens would provide him with even a moments rest to regain his stamina, his heart sank at the sight of the monotone numerals on his digital watch.

    "F*uck, I'm late," Bruce exclaimed, debating with himself whether to stop for a moment or push forward harder.

    With a deep breath he took the first and hardest step, continuing the final arm in a journey he would no sooner want to forget.
  • That's not all of it... just the first 'log' (chapter). I wanna write a whole story that precedes this mutant tale... perhaps telling how it all began...
  • Go ahead. No one's stopping you. xD I should make one too and compare it with yours.
  • Willykins wrote: »
    why are these kids writing fan-fiction?

    Cause we are bored....
  • Cause we're bored. And plus we're cool enough to write a story ;)