A sad story about poverty, Chapter 1 Part 3
So there I was, sailing on my newly stolen ship. All was sailing smoothly until we heard some noises on the poop deck. No...It can't be! AN ABOMINATION. THIS IS MADNESS WHERE DID THAT COME FROM?>???? I DONT UNDERSTAND IT HAS A DRILL FOR A HAND AND IT WAS SPEWING SMOKE AT US. It seemed as if we were doomed, but it turns out one of our boys had a spare Gatling gun lying around. One guy dressed up as a girl and distracted the poor thing while the gatling gun wielder rained bullets onto him, until he was cornered... into a corner. Slowly he was flashing red, and this indicated to us that he was at the brink of death. We were going to preserve him in a ton of ice but some ****** thought he was cool and "quick scoped" the near dead creature and the force was so strong that the thing flew over deck. Well thats one crew mate fed to the BR sharks. Anyways, that was one hell of an experience and I just can't get my mind off of it. Where did it come from? I do not understand and it is frightening me! Are there more abroad this ship? Is there something we don't know? We embarked on a quest to find more in our titanic ship and behold we found the source. There were three chambers with some mutated freaks in them frozen using cryogenics. I learned that one in bimology. Anyways, there were three chambers, but one was broken, possibly being the chamber of the creature that attacked us. Out of the two remaining, there seemed to be a female one but we did not take our chances. We sealed the secret room shut and we covered the freaks with a bunch of furniture before we left. I do not want to know where they came from but someone just might pay a hefty price for them so they are going to be kept in mint condition. As we were walking back up to the poop deck we heard a scream. "OH SHI....AAAAGGGGGH." We rushed back up only to be met with a surprise...
Comments
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Thanks so far, here are parts so far.
part 1 http://forum.z8games.com/showthread.php?t=105207
part 2 http://forum.z8games.com/showthread.php?t=105332
part 3 http://forum.z8games.com/showthread.php?t=105626 -
Hmm, let me guess your age, 14. Amirite?
Reasons:
Read a 14 year old kid's on level english paper, looks similiar.
Seems poorly and quickly made
The thoughts seem to be somewhat elementary
The vocabulary is elementary also.
You're not very good at integrating the sentences and game references. -
Hmm, let me guess your age, 14. Amirite?
Reasons:
Read a 14 year old kid's on level english paper, looks similiar.
Seems poorly and quickly made
The thoughts seem to be somewhat elementary
The vocabulary is elementary also.
You're not very good at integrating the sentences and game references.
Do you really want me to point out the numerous grammatical errors in the post you just made? It is a story for a reason, and I do not make my stories grammatically perfect because people cry that I am trying to impersonate a moderator. Your assumptions are invalid, now get out of my thread and go post somewhere else.
/moron -
Hmm, let me guess your age, 14. Amirite?
Reasons:
Read a 14 year old kid's on level english paper, looks similiar.
Seems poorly and quickly made
The thoughts seem to be somewhat elementary
The vocabulary is elementary also.
You're not very good at integrating the sentences and game references.
Learn to appreciate the ideas of other people and stop correcting grammar like a nerd. You aren't here to teach people grammar, this is a forum of an FPS F2P game, not an intellectual cafe, wake up.
Nice sequel btw -
hmm, let me guess your age, 14. Amirite?
Reasons:
Read a 14 year old kid's on level english paper, looks similiar.
Seems poorly and quickly made
the thoughts seem to be somewhat elementary
the vocabulary is elementary also.
You're not very good at integrating the sentences and game references.
t.r.o.l.l gtfo
GOOD STORY LIKE ALWAYS yL_ -
Hmm, let me guess your age, 14. Amirite?
Reasons:
Read a 14 year old kid's on level english paper, looks similiar.
Seems poorly and quickly made
The thoughts seem to be somewhat elementary
The vocabulary is elementary also.
You're not very good at integrating the sentences and game references.
dont read it then and do something on your own,mr.imtheonlycreativeguyhere?
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