lil crossfire vid

http://www.youtube.com/user/F4lcooon#p/a/u/0/MUa19zbXwrY

^ please watch it through this adress, soundtrack is blocked in video, but you can still hear it through my channel.


Im playing this game for about 2 weeks, im not very good player but i like editing, and i think im not bad at it. its not a montage, i want to get opinion of players about colours, quality, and everything else what comes with this short vid. What should i fix, what should i remove, becouse i want to make my own crossfire montage in future :P