CrossFire News Volume 4
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Topics need to be separated with headlines included. The information is too bunched together, but it contains good content. Editing needs a little work. I have some editing experience from back in my high school days. If you guys need any more help with the organization of the information, feel free to ask. This could be a mainstay here in the forums with a little more fine tuning.
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He didn't mean in terms of typos or grammatical errors. He meant in terms of the flow of the content. The subjects seemed to be bunched together and there was some poor choice of words in there making the transitions into the other subjects a little rough. The content and such was fine, but how the writer put it onto the screen is what needs to be worked on. The editing, like I said, needs a little work. That would make all the difference.
For example:
Welcome back honorable soldiers!
---This is your mission, should you choose to accept it---
The mission system has been successfully installed! Should you choose to complete your missions, a reward will be waiting for you at the end of your trials and tribulations. (Add more content here)
---The war rages on! Can the humans make it out alive from the deadly mutant attacks?---
RED ALERT! The mutants have broken out of the research facility! Head over now to help in the fight against these raging monsters! Do you have what it takes? Don't fret! Base camp has flown in additional weapons support to help combat the attack!
---This just in: New prototype sniper rifle - Will it turn the tide between the BL and GR soldiers?---
And so on and so forth. Make it interesting. If you are going to make it a newspaper type document, make it more like news. Get up-to-date info about current events, not just the updates. The Leagues, Pug vents, contests, etc. Make it a real News volume if you're going to do it. This could be great to have a central news type document to have all the current events going on in CF. -
thats crossfire's jobAnd so on and so forth. Make it interesting. If you are going to make it a newspaper type document, make it more like news. Get up-to-date info about current events, not just the updates. The Leagues, Pug vents, contests, etc. Make it a real News volume if you're going to do it. This could be great to have a central news type document to have all the current events going on in CF.
not ours
we just cover patches -
thats crossfire's job
not ours
we just cover patches
My points are being proven. Then you aren't news, you're just a re-post. Hate to break it to you. This needs more than just simply patch coverage if you want it to be considered "news".
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My points are being proven. Then you aren't news, you're just a re-post. Hate to break it to you. This needs more than just simply patch coverage if you want it to be considered "news".
Xfire: dexuscf
no CF just posts wats in the patch
we explain wat the stuff in the patches are
and [CM]FallenAngel gives us permission to do this and he approves of it
nice fake signature btw
its against Z8games forum rules, u can risk infractions for it
and for ur sig nice taking of a pic and putting ur name on it
super pro -
no CF just posts wats in the patch
we explain wat the stuff in the patches are
and [CM]FallenAngel gives us permission to do this and he approves of it
nice fake signature btw
its against Z8games forum rules, u can risk infractions for it
and for ur sig nice taking of a pic and putting ur name on it
super pro
You should receive infractions for posting this garbage...
PROTIP: Both refers to two things, not three. -
no CF just posts wats in the patch
we explain wat the stuff in the patches are
and [CM]FallenAngel gives us permission to do this and he approves of it
nice fake signature btw
its against Z8games forum rules, u can risk infractions for it
and for ur sig nice taking of a pic and putting ur name on it
super pro
Nice re-posting of already released information from the patches.
THAT'S super pro. Couldn't think of anything else to say to him so you had to comment about his signature? You're immaturity is amusing.
TIP: Learn proper English before posting what you consider to be news. GG -
okFallen_Hero wrote: »Nice re-posting of already released information from the patches.
THAT'S super pro. Couldn't think of anything else to say to him so you had to comment about his signature? You're immaturity is amusing.
TIP: Learn proper English before posting what you consider to be news. GG
so u call this a repost
look at wat we have
and loo kwat CF had
New Content:
- Daily Mission System added (see below for details)
- Complete missions daily and on consecutive days for additional rewards
- Access the mission system by hovering over the "m" icon in the game lobby window
- New Mutation Map 'Research Facility' added
- Sniper only Elimination Map 'Prison' added
- New GP Sniper Rifle DSR-1 added
- New ZP Crate Desert Eagle Scope added
- New ZP Shotgun XM1014-A added
- Gatling Gun has been added to Mutation Mode Supply Boxes only
- Reduce Fall Damage (Shock Absorber) added
- Damage zones added to the following maps
- Zone 13 Mutation Mode
- Port Mutation Mode
- Research Facility Mutation Mode
- Black Widow
- Ceyhan
- Desert Storm
- Downtown
- Eagle Eye
- QBZ-95 level requirement changed to Rank 12
- Scar Light level requirement changed to Rank 15
- Desert Eagle level requirement changed to Rank 9
- M12s level requirement changed to Rank 12
- M4A1-Custom ammo has been raised to +5 bullets
- Character specific items have been removed from the in game shop in favor of a system that only requires the player to purchase one type of item for all classes.
- Items previously bought will remain until they expire.
- New headgear/goggles/backpacks are available from the in game shop.
- This change will allow us to introduce items for all character models rather than create specific ones for each character.
- Missions will be displayed via the Mission button in the game lobby screen. (M)
- Any One of the 3 missions displayed can be completed daily for rewards like GP and items/weapons
- Complete 1 mission per day in consecutive days 5-10-15-20 and receive additional prizes
- Each time a mission is completed a player will also be awarded a 'Dog Tag'.
- Collect the word CROSS FIRE to receive additional Prizes
- Prizes will be set every 30 days.
- Mission progress can be tracked via the Mission button in the game lobby.
- Mission stats will also be shown upon game completion and when you exit the game.
cuz thats completely the same
and btw im not hte editor
i copy and paste
and fix some grammar errors that stuck out at me - Daily Mission System added (see below for details)
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Um, yeah. Read it yourself. He pretty much took the subjects out of there and put them into sentences. It is a re-post. Stop trying to make it look different. You just simply put it into a pretty little frame with some gfx.
Same information. Accept it.
But anyways, you are doing a good job for what it's for. All he was saying is change up the information a bit with other things. That's all.
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