Mutation Maps : Research Facility

Simrock007 wrote: »

The same thing I did for Excavation! http://forum.z8games.com/showthread.php?t=60400
This time : Research Facility! Give me your opinion, (By the way, it's based alot on the Rival Faction!)
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MUTATION MAPS


Titan Testing Facility



> DESCRIPTION

Dark...It's dark and creepy! The Black List Research Facilty
contains the worst creatures ever created! Discover how they
treat their patients and where Lt. Reinhardt has ended...The truth
is right behind these glass but don't get too close to them or they
might break! Oh! It's too late!
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What you guys think about this? I don't know, but I think that "Oh! It's too late!" is maybe too much? Tell me what I need to fix,

Simrock007 wrote: »

The same thing I did for Excavation! http://forum.z8games.com/showthread.php?t=60400
This time : Research Facility! Give me your opinion, (By the way, it's based alot on the Rival Faction!)
________________________________

MUTATION MAPS


Titan Testing Facility



> DESCRIPTION

Dark...It's dark and creepy! The Black List Research Facilty
contains the worst creatures ever created! Discover how they
treat their patients and where Lt. Reinhardt has ended...The truth
is right behind these glass but don't get too close to them or they
might break! Oh! It's too late!
_______________________________

What you guys think about this? I don't know, but I think that "Oh! It's too late!" is maybe too much? Tell me what I need to fix,