Essay.
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[FONT="]Peace is one of the most important things. It is a gift of the Holy Spirit, and one may mistake it as
a virtue. In Shakespeare’s play, Romeo and Juliet, there is a lot of conflict between the two families, the[/FONT]
[FONT="]Capulets and the Montagues. Peace is sparse, and shown most in none other than Benvolio. Throughout[/FONT]
[FONT="]the process of the play, Benvolio has shown his pride and caring of peace by trying in all of his power to [/FONT]
[FONT="]keep peace throughout the feuding, constantly seeking common good by telling only truths, and was [/FONT]
[FONT="]aware of the hatred between the families and was quick to leave a feuding scene.
[/FONT] [FONT="]Firstly, Benvolio has shown his pride and caring of peace by trying in all of his power to keep the [/FONT]
[FONT="]peace throughout the feuding. During the brawl between the Montagues and Capulets, even whilst Tybalt was tempting him to
draw and fight, Benvolio stated, “I do but keep the peace. Put up thy sword, [/FONT][FONT="]or manage it to part these men with me.” (I.i 62-63).
This showed that, even in the pandemonium of battle, Benvolio still had will to break up a fight that would cause unexpected and
untimely injuries or possibly even death. This proved that Benvolio always put peace first in hope of stopping a war from
brewing.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Secondly, Benvolio was constantly seeking the common good by always telling only the truth. He felt that it was the right
thing to do. After the unfortunate death of both characters, Mercutio and Tybalt, Benvolio told the prince, Escalus, exactly what
happened, he explained that, “Tybalt here slain, whom Romeo’s hand did slay, Romeo that spoke him fair, bid him bethink how
nice the quarrel was and urg’d withal…. This is the truth, or let Benvolio die.” (III.i,148-171). Benvolio told the whole story, front
to end, with no loose ends or concealment. He then added that the argument was big and that bother were enraged, proving that he
did not side with anyone on that matter. Benvolio then proceeded on and swore on his life, which persuaded Prince escalus to
believe him. This proved that Benvolio was a seeker of the common good.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Thirdly, Benvolio was aware of the hatred between the families and was quick to avoid and leave a feuding scene. In the
time before Mercutio was killed, Benvolio had a feeling of anxiety because he knew that the Capulets were out that day. He
wanted to leave, stating, “I pray thee, good Mercutio, let’s retire: The day is hot, the Capels are abroad, and if we meet we shall
not scape a brawl, For now, these hot days, is the made blood stirring.” (III.i.1-4). Benvolio was afraid of a reenactment of the
brawl the morning before, and of the death penalty of starting a brawl. This proved that Benvolio cared of his health, and was
quick to attempt to leave the situation.[/FONT]
[FONT="] In conclusion, Benvolio was a model for peace and he demonstrated it clearly. He always put the safety and well-being of
others in front of himself, always told the story for what it was, and always knew when it was a good time to back out of a
dangerous or harmful situation. Many people think that Benvolio was a coward, meaning someone afraid to fight or face anything
he was aware that he could not achieve. However, this is not true because he seemed to show that he was a pacifist. He did not
resort to fighting every chance that he could, but, used fighting as a last resort. In fact, the only time that Benvolio is portrayed as a
physically fighting character, is at the beginning of Romeo and Juliet, when he was attacked by Tybalt during the courtyard brawl
scene. In the end, Benvolio was a cunning and peaceful man who opposed hateful war, and ultimately, evil.
DISCUSS.
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[FONT="]Peace to the World
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a virtue. In Shakespeare’s play, Romeo and Juliet, there is a lot of conflict between the two families, the[/FONT]
[FONT="]Capulets and the Montagues. Peace is sparse, and shown most in none other than Benvolio. Throughout[/FONT]
[FONT="]the process of the play, Benvolio has shown his pride and caring of peace by trying in all of his power to [/FONT]
[FONT="]keep peace throughout the feuding, constantly seeking common good by telling only truths, and was [/FONT]
[FONT="]aware of the hatred between the families and was quick to leave a feuding scene.
[/FONT] [FONT="]Firstly, Benvolio has shown his pride and caring of peace by trying in all of his power to keep the [/FONT]
[FONT="]peace throughout the feuding. During the brawl between the Montagues and Capulets, even whilst Tybalt was tempting him to
draw and fight, Benvolio stated, “I do but keep the peace. Put up thy sword, [/FONT][FONT="]or manage it to part these men with me.” (I.i 62-63).
This showed that, even in the pandemonium of battle, Benvolio still had will to break up a fight that would cause unexpected and
untimely injuries or possibly even death. This proved that Benvolio always put peace first in hope of stopping a war from
brewing.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Secondly, Benvolio was constantly seeking the common good by always telling only the truth. He felt that it was the right
thing to do. After the unfortunate death of both characters, Mercutio and Tybalt, Benvolio told the prince, Escalus, exactly what
happened, he explained that, “Tybalt here slain, whom Romeo’s hand did slay, Romeo that spoke him fair, bid him bethink how
nice the quarrel was and urg’d withal…. This is the truth, or let Benvolio die.” (III.i,148-171). Benvolio told the whole story, front
to end, with no loose ends or concealment. He then added that the argument was big and that bother were enraged, proving that he
did not side with anyone on that matter. Benvolio then proceeded on and swore on his life, which persuaded Prince escalus to
believe him. This proved that Benvolio was a seeker of the common good.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Thirdly, Benvolio was aware of the hatred between the families and was quick to avoid and leave a feuding scene. In the
time before Mercutio was killed, Benvolio had a feeling of anxiety because he knew that the Capulets were out that day. He
wanted to leave, stating, “I pray thee, good Mercutio, let’s retire: The day is hot, the Capels are abroad, and if we meet we shall
not scape a brawl, For now, these hot days, is the made blood stirring.” (III.i.1-4). Benvolio was afraid of a reenactment of the
brawl the morning before, and of the death penalty of starting a brawl. This proved that Benvolio cared of his health, and was
quick to attempt to leave the situation.[/FONT]
[FONT="] In conclusion, Benvolio was a model for peace and he demonstrated it clearly. He always put the safety and well-being of
others in front of himself, always told the story for what it was, and always knew when it was a good time to back out of a
dangerous or harmful situation. Many people think that Benvolio was a coward, meaning someone afraid to fight or face anything
he was aware that he could not achieve. However, this is not true because he seemed to show that he was a pacifist. He did not
resort to fighting every chance that he could, but, used fighting as a last resort. In fact, the only time that Benvolio is portrayed as a
physically fighting character, is at the beginning of Romeo and Juliet, when he was attacked by Tybalt during the courtyard brawl
scene. In the end, Benvolio was a cunning and peaceful man who opposed hateful war, and ultimately, evil.
DISCUSS.
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Comments
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i didn't read your essay but according to what luck pointed out... it is always a smart choice to not use "proves." Instead say "supports"
edit:i read your conclusion...
1)you used always way too many times in a single sentence
2)you defined "coward"... um why
3)sentence with fighting should be revised
4)last sentence... there shouldn't be a comma before "and"
5)and many more things that need to be revised just in the conclusion itself -
yeahiiiTwAsLucK wrote: »You never write as or of literature in the past tense. It is always done in the present.
Eg: "has shown" should be "shows"
Eg#2: "proved" should be "proves"
even though its written in the past you have to say is even if Romeo is dead
:'(
i didn't read your essay but according to what luck pointed out... it is always a smart choice to not use "proves." Instead say "supports"
edit:i read your conclusion...
1)you used always way too many times in a single sentence
2)you defined "coward"... um why
3)sentence with fighting should be revised
4)last sentence... there shouldn't be a comma before "and"
5)and many more things that need to be revised just in the conclusion itself
suggests is good instead of proves
EDIT:lol if somebody plagiarizes it
I done an essay on conflict so heres ideas you can use to contrast it with
EDIT2: removed incase somebody plagiarizes and i get disqualified
if you wanna see it PM me
it got like 17 or 18/20
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