I'm uploading my final piece.
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Sorry to point this out but saying
"American produces etc."
isn't correct. It should be either Americans or America. And the "WTH?" is kind of innappropriate, as much as I hate to say it. But I guess its too late now
Other than that, I can tell you really put some work into this. Should be quite a contender. Good luck
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The whole sentence isBawsawrawn wrote: »Sorry to point this out but saying
"American produces etc."
isn't correct. It should be either Americans or America. And the "WTH?" is kind of innappropriate, as much as I hate to say it. But I guess its too late now
Other than that, I can tell you really put some work into this. Should be quite a contender. Good luck
" One American produces over etc, don't you see the #1 ? And my teacher was telling me to put WTF instead of WTH,it shows strong emotion toward the subject. -
the video is great and for a good cause
though you could work on typography and just overall video flow i guess?
it's those things that put you over the top ^^
But i liked it.Bawsawrawn wrote: »Sorry to point this out but saying
"American produces etc."
isn't correct. It should be either Americans or America. And the "WTH?" is kind of innappropriate, as much as I hate to say it. But I guess its too late now
Other than that, I can tell you really put some work into this. Should be quite a contender. Good luck
it said "1 American produces...."
the 1 was in the body.
I was confused at first too. -
the video is great and for a good cause
though you could work on typography and just overall video flow i guess?
it's those things that put you over the top ^^
But i liked it.
it said "1 American produces...."
the 1 was in the body.
I was confused at first too.
Thanks! -
I saw a lots of typo vids on youtube and they're just nothing special other than flipping and turning the texts, so i decided to make one that is unique from those.the video is great and for a good cause
though you could work on typography and just overall video flow i guess?
it's those things that put you over the top ^^
But i liked it.
it said "1 American produces...."
the 1 was in the body.
I was confused at first too. -
Oh wow, I totally missed the one in the body. Sorry for doubting you and thanks for telling me Rawr. I'm not against you putting in the WTF but I mean, at best, its slang. But if your teacher told you to put it in, by all means go ahead.
Still wish you best. -
got those facts from google, i forgot the website but it was about pollution and stuffs. Pretty sure they were right.What a wonderful video.
I would have no idea how you do that kind of thing, but it was very pleasing to watch.
I'm less convinced by your figures and facts and how reliable they are, however the video nicely distracts you from that.
GJ!
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