Guns Review Youtube Vid (please see)

Hey guys, -TheN00B- here.

I recently started my own Youtube channel, (http://www.youtube.com/CrossfireReviewer) and I use fraps to record my gameplay.

After I record I use Corel Video Studio Pro to edit my video and add a voice over so I talk about the gun Im reviewing while playing.

So fair I've got a review on the Kriss Super V and my Scar L review is coming up today.

So please can you checkout my video(s) and give me some feedback/tips on how I can improve.

P.S Yeah I know FSR are the best reviewers, I just wanna enjoy making some aswell.