[CF]Dreams
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: not gunna lie some nasty synching going down
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: pretty sick
Braveszzz: ty
Braveszzz: it gets messy at the end though
Braveszzz: i rushed it
Braveszzz: wanted to get it out tonight
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: if you had gun sounds and knew color corrections it would be so much beastier
Braveszzz: yeah
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: love that 3rd person angles on port
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: through wood
Braveszzz: ty
Braveszzz: best part is knife
Braveszzz: did you like it?
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: not done yet
Braveszzz: k
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: yeah that was really beasty
Braveszzz: :-D
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: lots to work on but way better than any of my first vids
LINK:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u2uhvTcka9k&fmt=22
~Dreams~
Player: BravesLovesU
Edited By: BravesLovesU
Frags from: Pubs and Scrims
Length: 4:07
Format: WMV
Soundtrack:
Slow to Dream-Approaching Nirvana
Girl in the Fire-Pendulum
Programs Used:
FRAPS
CF Replay
Sony Vegas 8 Pro
VirtualDub
Audacity
A 2 day project I worked on this weekend. SnD only.
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: pretty sick
Braveszzz: ty
Braveszzz: it gets messy at the end though
Braveszzz: i rushed it
Braveszzz: wanted to get it out tonight
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: if you had gun sounds and knew color corrections it would be so much beastier
Braveszzz: yeah
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: love that 3rd person angles on port
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: through wood
Braveszzz: ty
Braveszzz: best part is knife
Braveszzz: did you like it?
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: not done yet
Braveszzz: k
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: yeah that was really beasty
Braveszzz: :-D
#pStudios| iTwAsLucK: lots to work on but way better than any of my first vids
LINK:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u2uhvTcka9k&fmt=22
~Dreams~
Player: BravesLovesU
Edited By: BravesLovesU
Frags from: Pubs and Scrims
Length: 4:07
Format: WMV
Soundtrack:
Slow to Dream-Approaching Nirvana
Girl in the Fire-Pendulum
Programs Used:
FRAPS
CF Replay
Sony Vegas 8 Pro
VirtualDub
Audacity
A 2 day project I worked on this weekend. SnD only.
Comments
-
For your first video, its pretty good. Quality could be better. Could use color correction, better sync, etc.. but again it is your first video.
I didn't enjoy the soundtrack though.
Thanks for the feedback, I'm doing a scrim movie this summer so I'll keep that in mind. -
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Intro:
I didn't like the first 30 seconds or so to be honest. Seemed very fragmented and disjointed.
However, after that it really picked up. I loved the moderate glow effect, and going with the theme of "dream" it really fit.
6/10
Mid-Section:
Quality:
Quality wasn't great. As you said, you used fraps in half screen, and you couldn't record in-game sounds. I know what it's like to use a low-tech system and you did the best with what you could. Still, I would have liked some rifle sounds, and although the quality wasn't bad, it definitly could have been better. At times it was hard to read the names of players on the score board, etc.
6/10
Gameplay:
Gameplay (from what I could tell) was mainly pubs. AND it was replays. Usually this is a very bad combo. However, you made it SnD which automatically bumped up the grade of this tage, and you also edited the clips fairly well, in a way that makes it less "noob replay" and more decent. Some sick frags, and overall can't complain with the caliber of the clips. Nothing too amazing, but better than single frags.
7.5/10
Effects:
Not too many effects used, but when they were they were quite effective. Not over edited, not under edited. Seemed to fit well when you used them.
8/10
Sync:
I thought you did a great job on the sync. Felt clean when watching it, and not too rushed or anything. Perfect example is the spiral transition on ceyhan. A few shots were off etc. but well done overall.
8/10
Audio:
I loved the music selections, matched well with the "deam" theme, and fit the style of editing you used. Lack of in-game sounds was disappointing and I didn't like the awp sound you used, but still, it didn't detract from the video itself, so well done.
7/10
Extras:
Thought the knife kill was cool, and really enjoyed how you took the time to go 3rd person spec and get some cool angles. Shows dedication, and helps the movie flow.
5/5
Flow:
As said before, intro was choppy, however the actual vid flowed great. From one play to another, not too fast, not too slow. Fit to the music, and the fast forward + blur was used quite well.
9/10
Ending:
I thought it was cute. And credits were standard yet well done, not too slow, etc.
7.5/10
Overall:
Great video. I would recommend to anyone in terms of editing and gameplay even. Could have used some color corrections, and maybe a few more advanced effects. I've watched it 3 times already and I can definitely see myself watching it again. Not too short, yet not a beastly 8 minute tage. To the point, and well put together.
7.5/10
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