School Commercial

Speculate

I had to make an add for a school project. I used an old camera and moviemaker though. Feedback please.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kh3c2Iq_O1Y

stane031

Simple, giving enough information, good job

Speculate

Thanks for the feedback ^

Now just to finish the business portfolio.

Speculate

Anymore feedback?

SamuraiMoMo

For what it is I guess it is oke, but maybe you wanna add some kind of info screen for each person that shows there hobbies,sports,favourite something like movies,food or teacher etc

Speculate

SamuraiMoMo wrote: »

For what it is I guess it is oke, but maybe you wanna add some kind of info screen for each person that shows there hobbies,sports,favourite something like movies,food or teacher etc

Wait, what?
I didn't get that last part.

SamuraiMoMo

Speculate wrote: »

Wait, what?
I didn't get that last part.

Wait a minute here.....did you change the link?
Last time I saw it it was a video for some school event were people have to chose between some guys for a title.


Uhm or maybe it was a different thread O.o

[Seashore]

"All at one place" is a bit difficult to see. Other than that, for nothing professional, looks good.

InTheoryALT

******BREAKDOWN******

yeah that killed it for me


but its fine, everyone will like it

Speculate

Oh and if anyone is wondering the computers I showed in the beginning is my actual setup. :]